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I like it! Couple of nits, while you're looking for editing comments. 1) header of your blog page needs editing. Currently says "Category: tonybenm14blog" in big type. 2) Your home page has a bunch of pricing details at the bottom perhaps best left to the services page. I think it would be cleaner if the home page mentioned the range of services you offer in regular paragraphs rather than bullets, and without the pricing, and let folks click on the services page to get the details. | |||
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I would probably tweak the front page. It's a little busy with the pictures. I would also make the Home through Industry Affiliates a larger font. Other than that, it looks great and functions well. SIG556 Classic P220 Carry SAS Gen 2 SAO SP2022 9mm German Triple Serial P938 SAS P365 FDE Psalm 118:24 "This is the day which the Lord hath made; we will rejoice and be glad in it" | |||
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It's coming along very well! I got some testimonials filled in, the About section filled in and we got the web address display on the home page fixed. It seems we need to contact GoDaddy and have them fix the sub-page address displays too. It's a very complicated process and I'm glad I have someone else working on it. I added forms of payment on the home page. I'll be breaking up my pricing into groups: -M14/M1 Garand -AR15 -Remington 700/Savage 110 series/Other bolt guns Future services: -Barrel threading services -Nitride services -Action Blueprinting -Parkerizing -Nitriding Thanks for all the help and suggestions. Tony. Owner, TonyBen, LLC, Type-07 FFL www.tonybenm14.com (Site under construction). e-mail: tonyben@tonybenm14.com | |||
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Congrats on it all coming together. It's nice when this kind of thing is behind you and getting back to the reason you're in business. Best of luck, I hope this works out well for you. | |||
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