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Grammar nazi's welcome inside...(website test for my coffee)
March 29, 2018, 09:33 AM
kkinaGrammar nazi's welcome inside...(website test for my coffee)
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Originally posted by rainman64:
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Originally posted by kkina:
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A nice fulled bodied and chocolaty cup of coffee.
Should probably read, "full-bodied".
Thank you, corrected
You are most welcome. Did you get the second one a couple paragraphs down also?
March 29, 2018, 09:33 AM
rainman64quote:
Originally posted by kkina:
"Earthyness" should be "earthiness".
Wow, I was asleep at the keyboard for that one...LOL
Corrected the second full-bodied.
Can you tell I was cutting and pasting?
Also corrected my fat finger Limk...
Thank you all!
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March 29, 2018, 09:34 AM
smlsigOn the lower left of the PHOTO page you have:
Limk:
Instead of Link:
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March 29, 2018, 09:37 AM
jhe888quote:
Originally posted by kkina:
Actually not sure about this one: And my wife told me, "Hey Honey? You really should...." I'm wondering if the 4th period should come after the quotation mark.
No, in the USA, we always put periods inside the quote marks. Britain does it the other way.
"Because you know, women are always right!" needs a comma after
"Because."
The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. March 29, 2018, 09:39 AM
jhe888Some sell my coffee right next to their t-shirts and CD's!
No apostrophe after CD. Just make it CDs. Apostrophes are for possessives and contractions, never to make plurals.
The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. March 29, 2018, 09:39 AM
kkinaGetting somewhat nit-picky now, but techically in
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That's right the Heavy Metal Gods Saxon, drink my stuff!
should separate the two sentences. Perhaps:
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That's right! The Heavy Metal Gods, Saxon, drink my stuff!
Plus throwing in an extra comma.
March 29, 2018, 09:43 AM
kkinaYou could repurpose those apostrophes here:
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S/B Men's and Women's.
March 29, 2018, 09:51 AM
jhe888quote:
Originally posted by kkina:
Getting somewhat nit-picky now, but techically in
quote:
That's right the Heavy Metal Gods Saxon, drink my stuff!
should separate the two sentences. Perhaps:
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That's right! The Heavy Metal Gods, Saxon, drink my stuff!
Plus throwing in an extra comma.
Missed that one. I agree.
The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. March 29, 2018, 09:56 AM
rainman64quote:
That's right! The Heavy Metal Gods, Saxon, drink my stuff!
JHE. was waiting for you....
Done!
kkina, done!
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March 29, 2018, 09:59 AM
StramboNot grammar, but I think the title in the white box detracts from the otherwise streamlined and modern look. Just the words of the title in the top bar would look a lot better IMHO.
Great site, good luck!
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https://preparefit.ck.page March 29, 2018, 10:04 AM
rainman64quote:
Originally posted by Strambo:
Not grammar, but I think the title in the white box detracts from the otherwise streamlined and modern look. Just the words of the title in the top bar would look a lot better IMHO.
Great site, good luck!
This I can't change it as GoDaddy has a it set up that way...
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March 29, 2018, 10:19 AM
TMatsCool beans
I know...right?
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March 29, 2018, 10:22 AM
jhe888And Bill's coffee is excellent!
The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. March 29, 2018, 10:33 AM
ggile"And my wife asked me, "Hey Honey? You really should..."
Because you know, women are always right!"
Even though we know what you mean, these two sentences could be sharper.
Usually when a person asks something, e.g."my wife asked me," it should follow with a question. Here, it is followed by a statement. You could change the word, 'asked,' to, 'told'.
Also, "Hey Honey?", is not a question, but more of an exclamation.
So it could read: And my wife told me, "Hey Honey! You really should..."
"And you know, women are always right!"
Changing the 'Because' to 'And' reads better.
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March 29, 2018, 10:37 AM
rainman64quote:
Originally posted by ggile:
"And my wife asked me, "Hey Honey? You really should..."
Because you know, women are always right!"
Even though we know what you mean, these two sentences could be sharper.
Usually when a person asks something, e.g."my wife asked me," it should follow with a question. Here, it is followed by a statement. You could change the word, 'asked,' to, 'told'.
Also, "Hey Honey?", is not a question, but more of an exclamation.
So it could read: And my wife told me, "Hey Honey! You really should..."
"And you know, women are always right!"
Changing the 'Because' to 'And' reads better.
Thank you!
Completed
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March 29, 2018, 10:45 AM
Chris42In paragraph “How I got started” - you have two “d” in the word “told”
Good for you to get the wrinkles out. Ticks me off to look at what I believe is a professional page and find spelling errors. Instantly the credibility goes to zero with a mental picture of a bunch of idiots on the keyboard.
Best of luck with the business. I love a good cup of coffee.
March 29, 2018, 10:46 AM
rainman64quote:
Originally posted by Chris42:
In paragraph “How I got started” - you have two “d” in the word “told”
Good for you to get the wrinkles out. Ticks me off to look at what I believe is a professional page and find spelling errors. Instantly the credibility goes to zero with a mental picture of a bunch of idiots on the keyboard.
Best of luck with the business. I love a good cup of coffee.
Thanks, corrected.
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March 29, 2018, 11:03 AM
justjoe...yada yada yada.... When can we regular folks order some?
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March 29, 2018, 11:20 AM
rainman64LOL
When I finish my stay rehabbing my mother, I will announce here it is open for orders.
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March 29, 2018, 11:20 AM
HRKquote:
A bright, rich and balanced single origin drinker, with dark chocolate, tart cherry, and bright citrus notes, very good body.
Tighten up the sommelier summations and make it a statement:
Bright, rich, balanced, full body with hints of dark chocolate, tart cherry and citrus.
very good body leads me to think you have a swedish bikini team member drinking it..
I have no clue what single origin drinker means