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Lost |
You are most welcome. Did you get the second one a couple paragraphs down also? | |||
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Ducatista |
Wow, I was asleep at the keyboard for that one...LOL Corrected the second full-bodied. Can you tell I was cutting and pasting?  Also corrected my fat finger Limk... Thank you all! ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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On the lower left of the PHOTO page you have: Limk: Instead of Link: ------------------ Eddie Our Founding Fathers were men who understood that the right thing is not necessarily the written thing. -kkina | |||
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| Little ray of sunshine  |
No, in the USA, we always put periods inside the quote marks. Britain does it the other way. "Because you know, women are always right!" needs a comma after "Because." The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. | |||
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| Little ray of sunshine |
Some sell my coffee right next to their t-shirts and CD's! No apostrophe after CD. Just make it CDs. Apostrophes are for possessives and contractions, never to make plurals. The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. | |||
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| Lost |
Getting somewhat nit-picky now, but techically in
should separate the two sentences. Perhaps:
Plus throwing in an extra comma. | |||
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| Lost |
You could repurpose those apostrophes here:
S/B Men's and Women's. | |||
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| Little ray of sunshine |
Missed that one. I agree. The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. | |||
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| Ducatista |
JHE. was waiting for you.... Done! kkina, done! ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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| Member |
Not grammar, but I think the title in the white box detracts from the otherwise streamlined and modern look. Just the words of the title in the top bar would look a lot better IMHO. Great site, good luck! “People have to really suffer before they can risk doing what they love.” –Chuck Palahnuik Be harder to kill: https://preparefit.ck.page | |||
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| Ducatista |
This I can't change it as GoDaddy has a it set up that way... ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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Legalize the Constitution |
Cool beans I know...right? _______________________________________________________ despite them | |||
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| Little ray of sunshine |
And Bill's coffee is excellent! The fish is mute, expressionless. The fish doesn't think because the fish knows everything. | |||
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| I can't tell if I'm tired, or just lazy  |
"And my wife asked me, "Hey Honey? You really should..." Because you know, women are always right!" Even though we know what you mean, these two sentences could be sharper. Usually when a person asks something, e.g."my wife asked me," it should follow with a question. Here, it is followed by a statement. You could change the word, 'asked,' to, 'told'. Also, "Hey Honey?", is not a question, but more of an exclamation. So it could read: And my wife told me, "Hey Honey! You really should..." "And you know, women are always right!" Changing the 'Because' to 'And' reads better. _____________________________ "The problems we face today exist because the people who work for a living are outnumbered by those who vote for a living." "Those who would give up essential liberty to purchase a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin | |||
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| Ducatista |
Thank you! Completed ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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| Member |
In paragraph “How I got started” - you have two “d” in the word “told” Good for you to get the wrinkles out. Ticks me off to look at what I believe is a professional page and find spelling errors. Instantly the credibility goes to zero with a mental picture of a bunch of idiots on the keyboard. Best of luck with the business. I love a good cup of coffee. | |||
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| Ducatista |
Thanks, corrected. ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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Bad dog! |
...yada yada yada.... When can we regular folks order some?  ______________________________________________________ "You get much farther with a kind word and a gun than with a kind word alone." | |||
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| Ducatista |
LOL When I finish my stay rehabbing my mother, I will announce here it is open for orders. ___________________ "He who is without oil, shall throw the first rod" Compressions 9.5:1 | |||
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| Thank you Very little  |
Tighten up the sommelier summations and make it a statement: Bright, rich, balanced, full body with hints of dark chocolate, tart cherry and citrus. very good body leads me to think you have a swedish bikini team member drinking it.. I have no clue what single origin drinker means | |||
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