Writing a breakup letter to a customer

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March 07, 2022, 03:16 PM

mark123

Writing a breakup letter to a customer

quote:
Originally posted by Russ59:
Are you prepared to keep them on if they agree to your fertilizing services?

I'm up in the air on that.

March 07, 2022, 03:17 PM

NavyGuy

I'd lose the first part of of the opening sentence. "I wanted to"... because you don't want to, you did it. Maybe start that at "Thank you for..."

Men fight for liberty and win it with hard knocks. Their children, brought up easy, let it slip away again, poor fools. And their grandchildren are once more slaves.

-D.H. Lawrence

March 07, 2022, 04:33 PM

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I think you should have Airsoft Guy take a pass at it.

Kidding. A very thoughtful letter. Nice work!

“Crisis is the rallying cry of the tyrant.” – James Madison

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March 07, 2022, 09:08 PM

Rey HRH

The letter looks fine; nothing that waves a red flag.

I'm sure it can be tweaked better with some wording but you're 98% there and I think it's too much work to achieve the remaining 2% improvement for no benefit gained.

It's good to go.

"It did not really matter what we expected from life, but rather what life expected from us. We needed to stop asking about the meaning of life, and instead to think of ourselves as those who were being questioned by life – daily and hourly. Our answer must consist not in talk and meditation, but in right action and in right conduct. Life ultimately means taking the responsibility to find the right answer to its problems and to fulfill the tasks which it constantly sets for each individual." Viktor Frankl, Man's Search for Meaning, 1946.