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W07VH5 |
I have some lawns that I just hate to service so I have decided to drop a few of them. There are two reasons:
Can you take a look at this letter and tell me if it is acceptable or if I should make some changes?
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Lawyers, Guns and Money |
There's nothing wrong with it. Yes, it is acceptable. Most importantly, you gave them a reason. People would want to know why. "Some things are apparent. Where government moves in, community retreats, civil society disintegrates and our ability to control our own destiny atrophies. The result is: families under siege; war in the streets; unapologetic expropriation of property; the precipitous decline of the rule of law; the rapid rise of corruption; the loss of civility and the triumph of deceit. The result is a debased, debauched culture which finds moral depravity entertaining and virtue contemptible." -- Justice Janice Rogers Brown "The United States government is the largest criminal enterprise on earth." -rduckwor | |||
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I'm Fine |
sounds reasonable enough and the letter isn't snarky at all ( to me ) ------------------ SBrooks | |||
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W07VH5 |
Hmm, should there be a comma before and after "regrettably"? | |||
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Member |
That is fine. Above and beyond I would say. As in any business two percent of the people cause 98 percent of your problems. | |||
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I'm Fine |
I think that sentence could work with the two commas or no comma at all. Wouldn't worry too much about it. No grades forthcoming - only less mowing or more fertilizing... ------------------ SBrooks | |||
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Thank you Very little |
Why a letter, just tell them next time you cut. this is the last service for your yard, or two, give them time to arrange a replacement. Or do like most lawn services down here, and just stop showing up, don't answer the phone, ever, and disappear.... Letter looks fine being the wordsmith I'll play.. Dear <<first_name>, Thank you for being an excellent customer, I appreciate the opportunity to serve you. However, the nature of the business is changing, we now only provide mowing service to customers who participate in our fertilization program. Thank you again for allowing us to provide mowing services Regards, mark123 | |||
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W07VH5 |
Yes, I figured that I would want to know why. It's certainly not because they were bad customers or didn't pay. They've all been good customers. Thanks. I didn't want to be offensive in any way. | |||
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W07VH5 |
They are good people and good payers, it's just that the lawns don't fit into my schedule anymore and when the other companies blame me I have a hard time telling my customer that the other guy they trust more than me for some reason, is full of crap. | |||
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Member |
Mark, I think the letter is good. Very professional and non-offensive. My only concern is that customer #1 might become a fertilizer customer, and that you are trying to get rid of him due to reflecting poorly on your image. Unintended consequences? Thus the metric system did not really catch on in the States, unless you count the increasing popularity of the nine-millimeter bullet. - Dave Barry "Never go through life saying 'I should have'..." - quote from the 9/11 Boatlift Story (thanks, sdy for posting it) | |||
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W07VH5 |
Mowing doesn't start until first week in April and I want to give them time to call around for a replacement. | |||
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W07VH5 |
I have no issue with that. If they become a fertilizing customer then I won't be embarrassed to be seen mowing their lawn. | |||
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Member |
I'd give them a couple weeks or a month to find a new vendor...unless lawns are all dormant for a a few more weeks. "As of 1 April..." --------------------------------------- It's like my brain's a tree and you're those little cookie elves. | |||
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Thank you Very little |
Agreed, note the smiley,,, down here mowing season never ends, after 30 years we tend to forget that you northern guys have a "mowing season" | |||
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More persistent than capable |
The best trick in business is giving a bad customer to the competition. You are then free to find a good customer. Lick the lollipop of mediocrity once and you suck forever. | |||
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Member |
Mark, the letter seems fine. However I had a neighbor lady that falls into category no. 1. She was a long time customer and her lawn serviced dumped her and boy was she pissed off. Bad mouthed them to any neighbor that walked by. Just couldn’t understand why she was dumped, complained she was one of the lawn services original customers. I had no answer for her other than “Sorry”. As far as category no. 2. I’m not sure, but if you wanted to keep them as a customer perhaps lower your price if possible. I know some of these outfits can fertilize a lawn cheaper than I can buy the stuff and do it myself. Just my 2 cents. | |||
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Partial dichotomy |
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SIGforum Official Eye Doc |
Can you raise your “mow only” rates (double?) to make it *well* worth your while? If they can’t afford your rates, they’ll “drop” you. If they *can* afford your new rates, you’ll make more. Win-win? | |||
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W07VH5 |
I was hoping it would sound that way. | |||
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Needs a check up from the neck up |
If you want the fertilizer service biz, then price that on the letter if you truly want to drop then I would say gas is up and we are unable to service your location, or they may just ask to add the fertlizer service, then you are back dealing with a problem client __________________________ The entire reason for the Second Amendment is not for hunting, it’s not for target shooting … it’s there so that you and I can protect our homes and our children and and our families and our lives. And it’s also there as fundamental check on government tyranny. Sen Ted Cruz | |||
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